What did i learn?

The world is a hurt filled place. with most people only looking out for them self. that what i learned from a very young age. my story my experience with this helped me learn that my anger and hate was not going to get me anywhere other then in a police station or office room […]

Setting?

dimly lit room, walls with mixed color’s of a deserts red and white. filled edge to edge with brown maple wood desks, and horde blue dusty chairs. a silence like no ones there like a room left alone for years. ceiling that crumbled and left in disarray. how ever silent wipers echo across the room. […]

Sensory list

Concept word:looks like: a strobe light flashing around the room light blindingsounds like: shots off a gun as the earth trembles smells like: salt and sweat taste like: Iron a sweat yet painful tastefeels like: fault lines rubbing together creating epicenters leaving creates and marks in there wake. reminds me of: Release as the pressure […]

ROUGH ROUGH draft essay 2

You can’t really remember the reason or the person so much as the way you felt after it happened the rage that builds up in you as you clench your fist. The way it felt as your fist hit their jaw, the taste of blood from your busted lip as it enters your mouth. It’s […]

Person

the one of the men that are in my story is a blond hair blue eye short whit boy, with acne covering his face and a stature that of a underclass white trash kid. his cloths faded and his jeans ripped( before it was fashionable) a voice that stunk like a bee but a fist […]

Memory

I can remember how the impact of the punch felt, how the lights got brighter, I can remember how the table felt as my head hit it, I can remember the taste of blood that came from my lip the look of there faces as I hit them. the way the door felt as I […]

Out line

the setting is through out middle school and sophomore year. though out my time in middle school and sophomore year i was dealing with a lot of anger that lead to fights or hurting other people. i think the turning point in my anger was when i broke a door because of something small after […]

Imitation writing part two

I have come to believe that everyone goes thought their challenges and have to overcome there own obstacles, I’m here as a man who has had a challenging past with my emotions, especially with anger. I would go off in full-blown rages. about a couple years ago as I was walking to my room pissed […]

Reflection?

I have never written a rhetorical essay before, there was a lot to it that I didn’t quite know about. I did know the rhetorical devices. seems like every English teacher always re-taught it over and over again. Well, there’s a lot you can learn from someone’s opinion even if you don’t quite agree with […]

Final Draft?

Long term songwriter, Dino F Elefante, and John Elefante wrote the song titled Fight Fire with fire. published in 2002, performed by the band Kansas. The point he was trying to make in his music was being in such a messed up society, a runaway world of confusion we all need to start from somewhere […]